I'm feeling pretty good today, I'm all hyped about the equal right action happening in the states, and I'm working on a story. :) I canned this story awhile back, not knowing where it was going to go, but it's just a story, and it doesn't have to have any consequence unless I want it to. I can just have fun with it, and last night when I opened the document and fixed a bit here, and changed that bit over there, I got that familiar rush and focus. Here's the opening paragraph:
Hanna opened her eyes and stared at the ceiling. A few moments later the realization that the space in the bed next to her was empty overwhelmed her. George was gone. He had died, and she was alone. She had no reason to get out of bed, but her therapist had insisted, telling her it wasn’t good for her to just lay there all day long like that, so she got up. She went to the bathroom and sat down on the toilet, looked at the floor tiles and peed.
Huh? for the choices in the reactions....what am I agreeing with? reading always makes me think....so therefore I huhed it. ;) Story on.
ReplyDeleteHey Jude; I had a limited space with the reaction thing, so had to think of something general that could imply to everything that I post. I don't think it will work with everything, and I was thinking that it was providing a way for folks to provide feedback if they didn't want to post a comment. Had I more space, I would have put I feel the same way, or something to that effect, instead of 'I agree'. 'Makes me think', I think speaks for itself, and 'Huh?' provides a nice why for someone to say they don't get what I'm saying.
ReplyDeleteIs there more to the story? The beginning definitely caught my interest.
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